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Ohne Titel
Contributed by
gequetscht
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Shivering
I am so alone
I wait for you
I see your face
Everywhere I hear your laugh
I shout out to the moon
The cold stone
Could you hear my cries
Would you come and find me
Hold me
And tell me everything will be ok
Im so delicate in your arms
Victimized and fragile
Its so cold
Tremors coursing through my body
Crushed and crying
I try to forgive your eyes that close
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Re: Ohne Titel
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by banjo on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:32:13 PM AEST
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Maybe it should be "if you could hear my cries"
victimized doesn't seem to fit that stanza... maybe vulnerable instead? |
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Re: Ohne Titel
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 06:59:24 PM AEST
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| I'd just call it "Shivering" it has all the feeling that you cleverly express. |
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