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Damnn fish aren't biting
Contributed by
sugarshane
on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 10:18:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Damnn fish aren't biting
We we're hoping for trout
Do you really think
That this is what it's about?
No faxes to be faxed
All the errands have been ran
Today it's all about you &
Your little man
He couldn't care less if the fish didn't bite
He's fishing with his idol & he could do it all night
Oops dad another tangle
Oops dad I crossed your line
Don't worry big guy
I've done the same thing thousands of times
During the chaos of life
And the bickering and fighting
Some of the best fishing happens
When the damn fish aren't biting
Copyright ©
sugarshane
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2009-08-22 10:18:13]
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Re: Damnn fish aren't biting
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 06:24:47 PM AEST
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creative write...responsibility and duties can be a drag, but wen they're done u get rewarded. and we want to avoid such burdens like work, school, and such, we just want to be free from that grip. not sure if u intended this, but i sorta see where u went with this. great job
take care
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Re: Damnn fish aren't biting
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 07:21:20 PM AEST
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Seriously...this piece gave me goosebumps!
You are absolutely right and its never about the fishing when a lil one and his Daddy or Mama are spending time.You created some really lovely images and left me feeling quite inspired...
Thank you! |
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