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I am over you.........
Contributed by
LadyRose
on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 10:47:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I AM OVER YOU
forgot to remember you
heard this song now
the one you use to love
and I remembered
only when reminded I remembered
you no longer leave my memory in pain
the memories are controlled by outside effects
and no longer by the string that attached my heart to yours
Copyright ©
LadyRose
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2009-08-22 10:47:56]
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Re: I am over you.........
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 06:06:32 PM AEST
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I guess it's true what they say about time healing...
I'm not much for happy poetry but this was somehow very refreshing. |
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Re: I am over you.........
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 07:05:43 AM AEST
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The opening line is fantastic...a great title for a song *smiles*
It is short but I love the sincerity and rawness of it all and the ending line makes me smile lol *shrugs*
BRAVO! I loved it! |
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