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if i should die before i wake
Contributed by
smith2267
on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Assuming you knew
(for argument's sake)
your impending demise
and the form it would take
What would you do?
who would you call?
Does it really matter at all?
Or would you wink at a friend
And tell them true:
"I'm doing nothing tomorrow."
"How about you?"
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Re: if i should die before i wake
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 02:31:23 PM AEST
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Hi
Don't know why you've put it under
'grief and tragedy'. That's a terrific
punchline in the last two lines!
Hold on to that humour!
cheers
Tommy
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