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The Beginning
Contributed by
brasco
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Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 05:12:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Silence
At first a void
Then sudden burst of energy
Forces collide
Atoms split and divide
From nothing comes forth something
Radiance breaking free of abyss
Hot gaseous ball coalesces then cools
To form a planetary sphere
Which orbits a citrus giant
Giving off golden light
And warming touch
To embrace a world
And allow the basis for life
All this by chance and happenstance?
All complexity born from
Random motion and chaos?
How vast and unnumbered
The twinkle in the heavens
Yet all alone?
Oh I gaze up at yonder skies
And marvel at wonders
My eyes have never known
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brasco
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2009-08-24 17:12:42]
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Re: The Beginning
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 05:43:49 PM AEST
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this is beautiful!!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Beginning
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 07:14:12 PM AEST
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FANTASTIC!!!!!
I love the journey you took me on.Creative and thought provoking!
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Re: The Beginning
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 05:27:37 PM AEST
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A very poetic view of creation. I love your word choices and the imagery.
I've often thought about "the big bang" and assumed it would have been
a fearsome thing to behold. But your descriptions have made it a stunning
display of beauty.
Well written!
~ Breezy
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