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Resigned
Contributed by
ChenoaShiningwater
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Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 06:46:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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An unfaltering heart has made a bed on reincarnated trees
So pretty
Crumpled there by the candle
Melted wax falls,dots the eyes and I forget the tea
Splayed on winter's sheets,
I'm slapped by the insanity of such hopelessness
heartache and
words that fade without having ever found their home
I turn to the darkness of the corner,
close my eyes...
and "write" off the day
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ChenoaShiningwater
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2009-08-25 06:46:20]
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Re: Resigned
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 07:28:41 AM AEST
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Clever use of language, I liked it.
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Re: Resigned
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 12:05:48 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh, this is utterly and painfully beautiful. Like watching a sunset;
torn between the beauty of the moment and the sadness of the day's end, knowing
that darkness will soon drown the surround.
There is a deepness within your words that is comforting, even through its pain.
Wonderful post!
~ Breezy
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Re: Resigned
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 02:44:34 PM AEST
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This has a type of melancholy to it with a touch of beauty perfectly blended in. I am not exactly sure what it is about but I love it.
Seems, we all "write" off the day...or of it. :-)
Thank you very much for another enjoyable read.
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Re: Resigned
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:23:11 PM AEST
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I felt the deep sadness in this write. I also loved the different style, it just all fit perfectly.
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