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Daddy Daddy
Contributed by
ChenoaShiningwater
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Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 06:49:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Daddy Im so lost out here,frightened all alone
Daddy wont you come for me,
and carry me back home
It's raining and it's cold tonight,my tears are all thats warm
And daddy you know how scared I am,
of the thunderstorms
I think I hear you calling me,I cant find you,though I've tried
I thought you would have come for me,
you always did when I cried
I wish I was at home in bed,with my teddy snuggled near
To feel your kiss goodnight,
and see your smile clear
Your lil man is tired daddy,and wants to go nigh nigh's
So I better say my prayers,
the ones we shared,you and I
Daddy in the window,leave a candle burning bright
So your lil man can see his way,
back to your loving arms tonight
And GOD,if you are listening,please hold my tiny hand
Just until I get back home
just until my daddy can
I wrote this when lil Daniel Thomas-2yrs went missing from his home in 2003
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ChenoaShiningwater
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2009-08-25 06:49:56]
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Re: Daddy Daddy
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by spud on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 09:00:43 AM AEST
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Hi
As a father this pulls at the heartstrings - particularly on a subject that means so much to
me - protection of our children.
Once again your writing catches the soul and
essence of your subject verse. You are a very
talented lady. Keep the postings coming!
Tommy
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Re: Daddy Daddy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 02:15:02 PM AEST
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I am not familiar with the specific story of Daniel but I am all too familiar with that type of story/scenario. It's frightening and horrifically sad.
You convey that feeling with absolute brilliance with this poem! This definitely put a very large lump in my throat. I love the way you wrote it from his point of view.
And again...with the flow!
You my dear Chen have been added to my list of favorites.
Take care.
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Re: Daddy Daddy
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:20:22 PM AEST
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Ok now I am all teary eyed. Truly a beautiful write but also so darn sad.
Michelle |
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