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Longsleeves
Contributed by
sugarshane
on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:50:23 AM in AEST
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Another day
Here I go
Guess who's gonna win???
I already ***** know
Every step I take
Every breath I breathe
It's gotten so bad
I must always wear sleeves
The pain in my neck
The fire in my spine
Every ***** day
I dream of new ways to die
Summers almost here
Soon they all will see
How many times I've tried to leave
Unsuccessfully
Take another pill for pain
Sharpness gone
Unbalanced brain
Pull the trigger
Goodbye pain
Sorry about
The red blood stain
Alone in my coffin
Pain free finally
Sweet summer breeze
No need for longsleeves
Copyright ©
sugarshane
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2009-08-25 10:50:23]
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Re: Longsleeves
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by shaza on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 01:08:34 PM AEST
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| Such daily pain, a feeling of isolation in the words, very emotional shaza from paisley in scotland |
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Re: Longsleeves
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 03:53:46 PM AEST
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| I can really feel the pain and emotion in this poem. I often thought like this myself and at times still do. But I do hope that you have someone to turn to and know that someone out there does care about you |
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Re: Longsleeves
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by dirk-velvet on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 04:37:13 PM AEST
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The "Sweet Summer Breeze" was...is... ...
... always will be, Sweet.
Leave the "pain" to the Crazy world were in.
...Let it all go ... .... ....
....and ...
wear a tank top.
Peace&Love.
Dirk.
p.s ...
powerful poem ! |
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Re: Longsleeves
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:17:02 PM AEST
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A poem very well written though so darn sad.
Peace to you
Michelle |
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Re: Longsleeves
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:31:57 AM AEST
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it felt like i had some pain up my sleeves as i
read this (literally!) thats how effective this was...its a very painful yet deep poem here,
hope it remedied some of your agony...
dont let it get to u
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Longsleeves
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by LadyRose on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 11:48:39 AM AEST
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Yes I felt all that pain as I read........use to feel like that sometime ago....beautiful expression of feelings.
LadyRose |
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