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Crush
Contributed by
KeyboardPlayer
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Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 08:48:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The first time I laid my eyes on you
I knew you were the one
That Id think about
Years to come
Youre the one I dream about
Day and night
I cant stop
But I keep saying its not right
Ignore me as you like
Ignore me as you can
But youll soon wonder
Where did this all began?
If you thing.
That this poem is horrible
Then think so
This poem is my feelings for you that I must show
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2009-08-25 20:48:42]
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Re: Crush
(User Rating: 1 )
by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 06:15:14 PM AEST
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Is it supposed to get more twisted towards the end?...if so it kinda works.
So what happened next? |
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