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Lost&Alone
Contributed by
rayray01
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Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 11:33:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Do you see my tears hear my cry's? i want everything to be okay but it is not. nor will it ever be. i see myself killing you i say everything to hurt you but you hurt me please just let me go. LET ME GET OUT. but there is no one to save me. no place to go. Why cant i live that perfect life? I need everything to go AWAY. this pain.... the pills didn't help the screams, shouts, tears. nothing will I'm stuck her lost & alone. With nothing but pain.
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Re: Lost&Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:18:14 AM AEST (User
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Wow great job I could feel the pain in your words
just keep on writing you have a gift of wording
so keep building it
Great poem really enjoyed it |
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Re: Lost&Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:18:57 AM AEST (User
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P.S welcome to the site hop to see more from you |
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Re: Lost&Alone
(User Rating: 1 ) by wapalu55 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 12:06:13 PM AEST (User
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This is so true to life I can feel what you are saying very very nice |
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