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Crystal Chasm
Contributed by
Xjordanary
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Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 07:06:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Never twice on a crystal sky,
Never does the eagle fly,
Once the red thunders roll,
A fall of feather, an eerie toll
Soaring across the mountain send,
Feathers fall, crash, never mend,
Lightning, not common like most,
To this the eagle shall never boast
A blue flash brings a second death,
Eyes close, a final breath,
To whom that seeks the chasms wall,
Shall only meet their sudden fall
That is why the feathers blow,
Once, not twice, as we know,
The crystal sky must be broken,
If life can be re-awoken
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Xjordanary
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Re: Crystal Chasm
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 07:41:44 AM AEST
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i interpreted it as being that we should remove the barriers from our minds and fly joyfully in our own independence. Something like that anyway.
An interesting poem though with some good imagery.
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Re: Crystal Chasm
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by spud on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 09:02:00 AM AEST
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Hi
Perhaps a call to learn from our mistakes - to
ensure they're not repeated. Would that apply
to marriage too, I wonder?
Just kidding .... my cynical sense of humour rises
again.
Well crafted verse - thought provoking, to say the least.
Tommy
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Re: Crystal Chasm
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 05:43:37 AM AEST
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This spoke to me of Pheonix Rising.
"The crystal sky must be broken,
If life can be re-awoken"
Mother Earth is in trouble and the damage done cannot be undone but instead,Earth reborn from ashes,with those who come to inhabit,hopefully more wise.
I really enjoyed this piece.
Thank you...and thank you for your kind comment as well. |
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