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Blinded by time
Contributed by
winniss
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Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 06:24:45 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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I had a feeling today,
a wind swept whisper that drifted away,
the smell of flowers on a warm summers day.
She touched me forever and then went away.
I see her in the shadows that run with the night,
I feel her in the heavens that glisten with light.
I suffocate upon the memories that amber within.
I die with the words of what could have been.
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winniss
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2009-08-26 18:24:45]
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Re: Blinded by time
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 08:47:18 PM AEST
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That last line just about killed me ... damn. Your words are like a dagger to
the emotional and wanton heart. Excruciatingly melancholy this is, but
somehow so provocatively beautiful.
What could have been. Those words should be illegal to utter.
Excellent post!
~ Breezy
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Re: Blinded by time
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by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 06:50:53 PM AEST
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Teriffic!! Classy,elegant and yet smartly short and 2 the point!! Keep fine tuning your work!1Keep posting too!!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana |
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Re: Blinded by time
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 10:08:22 PM AEST
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It is short but it is filled with the heart.
I agree with Rox the end ohhhh ouch.....
Beautiful in its sadness, very touching write on this heart.
Michelle |
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Re: Blinded by time
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by Antzus on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 05:10:01 AM AEST
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| Wonderfully succint. So effective in making me empathise with the subject. It's like the last resonating chord, fading out on a unhappy ballad - makes me long for a happy ending |
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Re: Blinded by time
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by longhaircg on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 08:16:09 PM AEST
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great writing as always , glinches my heart, to think what might have been
sp |
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