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Something Wrong in my Design
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 08:07:50 PM in AEST
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I guess there is something wrong in my design
In more ways then one Im blind
Blind in sight
Blind in what I should see right
People call me a fool
And in a way they are right
Im simple as can be
But people dont understand why I cant see
Why do I not care?
I guess the blueprints arent there
Fault in my design
In more ways then one Im blind
I can't see
Why the design plans aren't there
I don't see why I don't care
I don't see why so many do
Why do you?
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Re: Something Wrong in my Design
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 08:14:48 PM AEST
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I love this poem. Nice flow. Many people feel they are blind in many ways. You do have poetic vision, however.
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