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Back In Utero
Contributed by
ChenoaShiningwater
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Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:22:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Ever frail in the darkness and again in light of day
Seeking an abandoned womb to grow another way
Surrounded by so many,yet some regarded still by few
These are times of yesterday,just colder and more blue
We walk a path a thousand times,some just once to death
Consumed by pain of broken dreams,lost in one mere breath
Levelled by insanity,yet raised to hold the thought of hope
Words hover these empty pages in the struggle just to cope
Indifferent to the softer tones, as if we find belief too far
Always further than near reach,the ever wished on star
Everything seems overboard,to crawl upon a different shore
Bear witness to the the thief of time,as it steals a little more
All thats left are hidden memories of a place we cant recall
Yet we learn about its safeness as we grow outside its walls
Where in the soothing darkness,floating in our mothers' womb
We never knew the days to come and the time they would consume
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ChenoaShiningwater
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2009-08-28 04:22:11]
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Re: Back In Utero
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 07:09:58 AM AEST
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I liked it, some nice imagery and an engaging style.
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Re: Back In Utero
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:45:13 PM AEST
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This just flowed, sensed a hint of blue in here too....... Lovely.
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