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Hero
Contributed by
anomalei
on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 09:12:59 AM in AEST
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My hero, doesnt fly.
He dances and sings,
Listens to the blues and drinks wine when he cooks.
He watches old rock stars on Sunday mornings,
And hates vegetables because theyre healthy.
My hero cant lift buildings.
He laughs and cries,
Says whatever is on his mind
He only eats cold eggs and drinks chocolate milk,
And gets his colors all wrong.
My hero
Bluest eyes
Laughs the loudest
Despises liars
My hero
Three years old
The half to make me whole
Composed of compassion and smiles
My heroes, save lives
My heroes, have no fear
My father, my brother
Hate one, love the other.
Copyright ©
anomalei
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2009-08-28 09:12:59]
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Re: Hero
(User Rating: 1 )
by Xjordanary on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 10:16:08 AM AEST
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| Wow this is a nice write indeed. You have captured something special here. Everyone has their hero, most are still looking for one. I envy you :) |
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Re: Hero
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by ming on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 08:52:41 AM AEST
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OK...its me again (ming) don't you EVER stop writing dear one. You defintely have something here. You words speak volumes. Can't wait for more!!
ming |
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Re: Hero
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th September 2009 @ 05:02:40 AM AEST
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A funny, passionate write. Something a little different, and I like that.
-Phil |
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