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Hope Is How I Survive.
Contributed by
crookedpoet09
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Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:51:57 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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The cannons are sounding from afar,
They shake the earth as we all fall apart,
But our heroes make the end bright,
And give us a taste of a gold, warming light,
Who doesn't wonder when we can plan our future?
With things to look forward to when it's over?
ZOOM and a bullet shoots past my ear,
Snapping back to reality and feeling the fear,
The grim truth is these countries are falling,
The essence of freedom has been lost and stolen,
And so as my family frame is crushed,
I fight for what's left in my hardened life...
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2009-08-28 16:51:57]
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Re: Hope Is How I Survive.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:07:50 PM AEST
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It must be so desperately difficult to live a life during wartime. I have never
known war like that but I admire those who must live it every day. People here
complain about the most ridiculous things and forget that there are people
struggling just for their right to live, never knowing when it will end. I admire
your words and yes, they are very uplifting. I LOVE the title! It is exceptional.
Exceptional post. Sad and hopeful all at once.
~ Breezy
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Re: Hope Is How I Survive.
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 09:58:14 AM AEST
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| sad but great write. what a point of veiw. I agree with breezy..ppl complain about the sillyest things....if they only knew first hand what others do. |
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