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SUICIDE
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 02:47:05 AM in AEST
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Father God,
Our children are dieing at their own hand.
It's spreading all over this land.
They call um gangs; bloods, crips and other names.
What a sad tricky game.
There's nothing good in their end.
Please help them understand.
It leads to death, no place to hide.
Blow the cover on this suicide.
What happened, who failed them so
that they have no other way to go?
Where is this key to tender hearts
Giving them luv, a new start?
I'm just a concerned soul.
My heart bleeds for them, you know.
Give us wisdom to get through
To reach um with your luv, so true.
Copyright emystar ...
Monday, June 24 2002 @ 15:32:58 AEST
Copyright ©
emystar
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2009-08-29 02:47:05]
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Re: SUICIDE
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by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 01:47:50 AM AEST
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Teriffic!!! Shows that people out there still care about our youth and the paths they take...We all hope that they are able to get on the best one possible!! I know mine werent always such good ones at all so,... BUt here i'am!!!! Good work!! Keep Posting and Keep Writing and sharing 4 sure!!
Peace 2 you & yours,
Dana |
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Re: SUICIDE
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 08:45:01 AM AEST
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2002!!...God, and it ain't getting no better. In the last few years the scale of gang related violence and gun crime in England seems to be going up and up!
Aside from that depessing note, this is a strong and well written piece. |
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Re: SUICIDE
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by inkmaster on
Saturday, 28th November 2009 @ 07:15:29 PM AEST
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| Very profound I liked it a great write..inkmaster |
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Re: SUICIDE
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 25th August 2010 @ 06:00:11 PM AEST
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Reminds me of a song I heard on the radio, Changing the World. We need to not forget all the violence and death that's in this culture, and this is a good reminder.
Take care,
David |
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Re: SUICIDE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 12:08:21 PM AEST
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| i like this poem because most people just fell fear from them, they dont usually give sympathy. its a wonderful, caring poem |
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Re: SUICIDE
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by Cryptiss on
Sunday, 7th November 2010 @ 02:26:39 PM AEST
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| very good writing also very deep. keep up the great work. |
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Re: SUICIDE
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by jamesatteb on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 10:07:42 AM AEST
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love this!
its so true,nowadays theres too much violence out there and not enough love to go around!
like the song says"all you need is love" |
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Re: SUICIDE
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by resist77 on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 05:12:18 PM AEST
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| With a family member who commited suicide, I know first hand the pain this action brings forth. Thankfully, there are people who are there to try to shed some light on this dark tendency. |
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