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gone
Contributed by
rossdean
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Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 10:45:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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ABSENT
OUT OF MY LIFE
WHY
GOODBYE
DOES THAT APPLY
DENY
MISS HIM
OUT ON A LIMB
DIM
GRIM
CANNOT THINK
HAVE NO SYNC
LOST THAT LINK
Copyright ©
rossdean
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2009-08-30 10:45:29]
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Re: gone
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by spud on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 05:06:52 AM AEST
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Hi
Am reading between the lines.
The journey can be long when looking for
understanding.
Hang in there, and don't be put off by
bovine comments.
Tommy
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Re: gone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 03:04:04 PM AEST
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so few words but with the greatest amount of pain. I feel ya. The
passage of time does help eventually. And yeah, what Tommy said
about certain other asinine comments. . .
“Anyone who thinks they're important is usually just a pompous moron
who can't deal with his or her own pathetic insignificance and the fact
that what they do is meaningless and inconsequential...”
~ William Thomas
(and I find often, they must voice their loud "YAWP" to prove it!)
Keep writing!
~ Breezy
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Re: gone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 04:58:38 PM AEST
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Good stuff, I liked how you wrote it.
-Phil |
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