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The World keeps spinning
Contributed by
boy7wonder
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Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 12:19:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Either my mind is deceiving me
Or the closer I get to people, the less they believe in me
Find my therapeutics thru the contents of a letter
Swear I deserved better
Driven to find a place where failure cant lurk
For it seems everyone else around me has the manual on how to make it work
Used to love surprises.. now Im afraid of whats next
Hearts far from cold, so why when it comes to moving on I freeze?
Feeling enclosed in an alphabetical prison, Im stuck on Y and the answer lies in the eX
No wonder I cant catch any Zs
Taking everything I got not to be bitter or indignant
Which would b normal, but Im me cause Im indifferent
Asked god for one good opportunity, 4 years later I got it and couldnt deal with it
Now Im searching for a fresh start, a place where this broken seals lifted
You can say Im gifted cause I live for the present
For some reason experience insists on teaching me lessons that are more pain than pleasant
To lose it all and pick yourself up, start over from the beginning
Nothings ever promised cause the world keeps spinning..
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2009-08-30 12:19:39]
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Re: The World keeps spinning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 02:27:06 PM AEST
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Holy crap! This describes exactly what hitting rock bottom feels like. I love
so many lines in this, I couldn't pull any one out to forsake the others. I
see myself in so much of this that it actually makes me break a sweat. Wow.
Well done! This is gripping in one of the most anxious ways. I feel your
torture and ambiguity. You've expressed yourself exceptionally well here!
Chin up and take care ~
~ Breezy
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