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I am blind
Contributed by
LadyRose
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Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 11:43:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I AM BLIND
Its dark
Black
Sounds becomes colors
Four remaining senses becomes my vision
Remembering things last pictured in a frame
with my camara
soon will be fogotten
I have no memory stick
how will I save the face of my son?
The smile of my lover?
All is dark to me now.
I see only night
even though the sun shines......
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LadyRose
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2009-08-31 11:43:21]
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Re: I am blind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 01:45:55 PM AEST
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Oh how heart wrenching! You've really outdone yourself with this
one, rose. I can truly feel the fear and anxiety one must feel at a time
like this. These moments are why I could never become a nurse or
anything else that has to do with the medical profession. My own pain
I can endure. But I could not hold anyone else's. I commend you and
all who do this. You are some of the bravest and most compassionate
people I know. The poem was so well written. It evokes much sorrow
and empathy.
The last two lines are as a dagger to the heart.
~ Breezy
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Re: I am blind
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 02:55:11 PM AEST
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Touching write, I understand this as my dad has lost most of his sight. You penned this well.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: I am blind
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 06:57:35 PM AEST
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interesting piece...i can totally empathize, something very difficult to go thru esp. wen one longs to see those dear to him/her. great write.
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: I am blind
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 08:28:22 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
One really don't know what it's like untill they can't see any more still you chaneled this one really well.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: I am blind
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 08:07:46 AM AEST
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my father is going through this, his sight is almost gone and its scary, this is how he feels, and to make it worse hes an artist who can no longer paint,
hugs n' love nessa |
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