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Fortunate Son's

Contributed by sugarshane on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 01:39:20 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You two *****s are witnessing your luckiest day

A simple question
Stated simply enough
Need I remind you again
This is your lucky day

Is this a one song set
Do you follow my lead?
Show some respect
Folks are trying to read

Here begins your lucky day

We can play louder
We can play more
No one payed to hear a concert
As a matter of fact
Your music is quite a bore

We're trying to read
It's been a long day
I'm the only one with balls enough to say it
But Nobody on this train
Wants to hear you play!

You guys start popping off
***** about to start
11years ago both you Mother *****s would have been CHOKED OUT on BART

But that was then
I have kids to think of now
I'm so close to snapping on you mother *****s
You have no idea how

One by one
Stop by stop
People leave the train
But not before giving a wink,
a thumbs up
Some sort of silent prop!

It was a simply stated question
Stated simply enough

It took longer than expected for my anger to go away
But hey!..... you two are still standing
I hope you realize
Today is your luckiest day

Copyright © sugarshane ... [ 2009-09-01 13:39:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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