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Melancholy
Contributed by
dirk-velvet
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Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 02:49:48 PM in AEST
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The dog ran away.
It's been raining all day.
i wish it were
that easy.
when you know what
should be done.
Call the dog.
Wait the rain.
it's different when you
don't know.
or ...
know
but
can't.
Copyright ©
dirk-velvet
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2009-09-01 14:49:48]
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Re: Melancholy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 05:26:01 PM AEST
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So simple this thought, but you truly captured melancholy impressively.
I actually felt a pang of anxiety upon reading this. You've done very well
in describing and evoking the emotion. Excellent post!
~ Breezy
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Re: Melancholy
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 08:33:08 PM AEST
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I must ditto Rox, yes indeed you captured it perfectly........
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