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Someone........
Contributed by
evangelise
on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 09:09:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Someone, has always been there......
someone has always been in a shadow.......
that someone has always been there....
that someone has been true all through........
Someone who could of made life complete..........
someone who could have been my smile,
someone who my smile
was always true to.
Oh my someone,
someone to hold,
someone to touch fingers with....
someone to complete my cresent moon,
and make me whole like a full moon...
Oh someone,
one day you'll believe me,
that you You make the stars dull,
that you your my moon and sun...........
you are my every thought ...
my morning smile.........
my, someone ..
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evangelise
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2009-09-02 09:09:52]
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Re: Someone........
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 10:48:14 AM AEST
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| We can always hope, right? |
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Re: Someone........
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by Incognito_Bombastus on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 11:55:13 AM AEST
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| an elegant appeal to the cosmos an an admirable poem, the imagery and metaphor is crystaline and lucidly clear. Thanks I.B. |
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Re: Someone........
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by Mrmatt on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 04:12:47 AM AEST
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| you forgot, someone to illistrate the pure beauty of life, great work, I stand in awe of this |
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Re: Someone........
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 08:16:40 AM AEST
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this is beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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