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That girl you said
Contributed by
CMkelly
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Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 12:08:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Im the leaf that blew far too far
Im the truth between your every scar
Im the wave when you want calm
Im the one that caused you harm
Youre the one that gave me joy
Youre the one, the only boy
Youre the one I really need
Youre the one I can lead
I could make you cry with pain
Or kiss you carelessly in the rain
I could make you angry, hot like fire
And still fulfil your every desire
Im the fear killing you dead
Im the hope inside your head
Im that girl, that girl, you said.
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2009-09-03 12:08:16]
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Re: That girl you said
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by kye on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 04:21:42 PM AEST
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I liked your rhyming. The girl in your poem sounds manipulative yet, interesting.
I loved LOVED your opening "I'm the leaf that blew far too far"---that just captured me.
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