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You Should Hold Your Tongue
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 08:02:30 PM in AEST
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To much time
To have thoughts in my mind
I dont know what to do
I have to keep busy to keep from harming you
But action my lead to action
That caused by the thoughts just pure reaction
I cant just sit in thought
Id rather ROT
Thoughts of harming you
I think I could do it now
I have the why, where, and how
You ask what did you do
You are a child
Your actions are wild
You dont seem to care
In your world youre the only one there
No one elses words matter
Your world will one day shatter
You will say something to the wrong person
They wont want to let you go on and let you be
And just think that person might be me
You should hold your tongue
Silence your voice
Keep it to yourself
Leave me be
So these thoughts can leave me
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-09-03 20:02:30]
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Re: You Should Hold Your Tongue
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 08:17:33 PM AEST
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kelly, this was quite powerful. There is pain, but strength;
suffocation but also release. That last verse is exceptional.
Excellent post!
~ Breezy
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Re: You Should Hold Your Tongue
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by shelby on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 08:45:34 PM AEST
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Kelly,
this is fully charged with emotion and power.
I also relate right now so deeply to the subject matter in this write. It is so hard sometimes isn't it?
Well written poem again
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