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The Undoubted Troubles Of Man
Contributed by
Xjordanary
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Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 09:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A fall of tree,
No cash for the,
A black mans rise,
Worlds empathy,
Take down the wall, break the stone,
Take those who built it, and break the bone,
One child may starve,
Another, gorge food,
Rich mans broke,
Now forced to loot,
Evil in the north,
Evil in the south,
Stick and stones will break thy bones,
Murder from the mouth,
Bullet ends it all,
Seems like logic,
Yet mans blind to fall,
Endings tragic,
Trick revealed,
Thats not magic
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Xjordanary
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2009-09-03 21:37:54]
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Re: The Undoubted Troubles Of Man
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by shelby on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 10:39:41 PM AEST
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You created a well written and very honest write here.
Life is a bit spooky these days, tis true.
Nice work
Bless you
Michelle |
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Re: The Undoubted Troubles Of Man
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by Antzus on
Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 06:14:29 AM AEST
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This is great! I liked it the first time I read it, and really liked it the second time. For some reason I love "Murder from the mouth". Strange ending though.
As the Flobots say "there's a war for your mind. If you're thinking, then you're winning". Keep that questioning mind alive. |
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Re: The Undoubted Troubles Of Man
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 01:03:26 PM AEST
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Good, honest writing.
-Phil |
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