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REVELATIONS
Contributed by
JAMIEAG27
on
Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 07:28:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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AS I WAKE UP IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
COLD SWEAT TRICKLES DOWN ON ME, I'M IN FRIGHT
NIGHTMARES INVADE MY MIND, MY SOUL
BUT I DON'T WANT TO FACE THEM, I'M DIGGING DEEPER IN THIS HOLE.
I FEEL LIKE I'M IN HELL, MY LIFE IS HELL
AND I'M THAT LONELY CHEESE IN THE FARMER IN THE DELL
NO WHERE TO TURN TO, NO WHERE TO RUN
I THINK OF THIS AND REACH IN MY DRESSER TO PULL OUT MY GUN
I FEEL LIKE I'M RUNNING OUT OF TIME
SHOULD I LEAVE THIS WORLD BEHIND?
PRAYING FOR HEAVEN FOR I SEE HELL EVERYDAY
I PUT THE GUN TO MY TEMPLE, MY HAND ALREADY KNOWING THE WAY
I PULL THE TRIGGER. I HARDLY FEEL PAIN
THEN I SEE MY BLOOD FALL LIKE RAIN
UP ON THE CEILING, ON THE FLOOR, ON MY BED
THEN I CLOSE MY EYES FOR NOW I'M DEAD.
DARKNESS SEEPS IN, I LEAVE MY BODY BEHIND
THINKING I LEFT MY LIFE JUST IN TIME
EXCLAIMING, "YES! GOD WILL TAKE ME TONIGHT!"
HOPING TO SEE THAT LIGHT SO BRIGHT
BUT INSTEAD I SEE DARK, EVIL DEMONS COMING OUT OF THE FLOOR
AND I REALIZE I HAVE TO LIVE IN HELL ONCE MORE.
Copyright ©
JAMIEAG27
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2009-09-05 19:28:39]
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Re: REVELATIONS
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by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 11:59:04 PM AEST
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| well written i could feel yr pain and unspeakable secrets....i written that kinda poetry |
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Re: REVELATIONS
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 10:12:47 AM AEST
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Very deep and dark just the way I like them
Great job on the rhyming and wonderful structure. |
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