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The Curse of Imagination
Contributed by
Xjordanary
on
Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 11:42:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Streaming down side cliff,
Moment bares and moment riff,
Sun of violet and sun of gold,
Ruby, sword, dream do we hold,
No bounds mist the sea,
Free of trust and misery,
Opaque lies do not hold,
Alone, unfound, pleasant cold,
Want the glory, feel the fame,
Never reached, yet no self blame,
For if it was found, imagination would decay,
This feeling of translucent, gone, mind astray.
Plains of life, emeralds death,
Combine the light, your final breath,
The settings yours, you lay beneath,
Ambush holds, sword, soul, sheath.
Burden of freedoms is yours to bare,
Say, walk, speak, no one hears, but you care,
The daylight gestures moon, the walls are melting sun,
Afternoon is felt, yet there isnt one,
Eyes open and the now becomes the real,
Breath upon your hand... damn... i can feel.
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Xjordanary
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2009-09-06 23:42:03]
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Re: The Curse of Imagination
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by razorbladekisses on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 01:08:18 AM AEST
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I really liked this, and I enjoyed the rhyming scheme.
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Re: The Curse of Imagination
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 10:32:23 AM AEST
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Good writing. I especially liked this bit for some reason:
'Opaque lies do not hold,
Alone, unfound, pleasant cold,'
it just got through to me.
-Phil |
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