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FREE
Contributed by
LadyRose
on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 12:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I was addicted to nicotine
had to have it every day
every other hour
sometimes wished I could just breath it
......like oxygen
now I am addicted to living
......purely
dont want necrosis eating away at me
.....this temple
is sacred,I will respect it
I craved alcohol at times
it just made me silly
made me dance like a fool
made me submit to worldly pleasures
.....empty buckets of nausea
I ate it........
hangovers,waisted energy.......
I am free from this temptation
I have a greater power living in me
My dreams use to be filled with.....
.....sad nothings
.................depression use to eat me
first my heart with a piece of my mind
.......but not my soul
That I gave to my Father
Peace....thats in my heart
and forever I will serve Him with all that is in me
Forgive me for rambling on.........
I just feel to share my glee
I am truely
............free
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LadyRose
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2009-09-07 12:23:50]
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Re: FREE
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by PoluxTheFifth on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 12:47:11 PM AEST
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You remind me of me writing for Christ when I was younger
Beautiful transition between the past and today´s life.
May the Lord be with you |
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Re: FREE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 01:32:35 PM AEST
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Well I'm not religious, but even I can see the joy of your salvation. If god got you out of that meaningless cycle, good for you I say.
-Phil |
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Re: FREE
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 10:54:17 PM AEST
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I am also not religious but I feel the free in this verse! Whatever brings freedom and joy is wonderful. Concrats on your hard work at finding your life where you want it! There is alot to be said for that.
(I am still smoking, havent got it licked yet lol)
Hugs and blessings
Michelle |
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Re: FREE
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by justme03 on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 03:20:50 PM AEST
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I am glad you are free now.
It is a good thing to find some peace and I see that though writing and your beliefs you have done that.
I really have nothing constructive really to say about this poem in the way of writing and things. I think it is good the way it is. :D
The way you wrote it...was free. |
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