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The morbid girl
Contributed by
briony
on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 01:01:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She watched her self in a mirror
Looking at her ever moment
A cold tear ran from her eye
And she tried to rearrange it
The tears doubled and doubled
And her vision had a cover of water
She watched her self fall to the floor
But there was no one to catch her
Her eyes then shut
And no more tears could of run
She had played the game well
Because she won
Her heart didn't beat
And her blood didn't flow
People never started to question it
They didn't want to know
She wasn't a girl of many words
And she never looked forward
She never saw the good things in life
She was incredibly morbid
No one thought about who she was
And no one could of asked about she
Because my eyes were shut and my heart didn't beat
Because the morbid girl was me.
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briony
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2009-09-09 13:01:23]
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Re: The morbid girl
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 03:27:58 PM AEST
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The way you wrote this made it very powerful.
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