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depression in school
Contributed by
hetlerkh
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Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 04:23:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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am so mad
am at the madness's crest
i feel it heavy like a blest on my chest
to enjoy school is my quest
but just as i enter the main door i get depressed
we are fun guys ! we love to jest
but in this school u just get stressed
uniforms like tramps we get dressed
what do u suggest ?
protest ?!?
us they'll start to arrest
the books are so many
and the pages we have to swallow and digest
so we can vomit them in the final test
from studying we don't get a chance to rest
with the teacher i have tried and messed
but the teachers are so blessed.
they are such a pest
they don't let us laugh
to make us sad is there quest
with making us mad they are obsessed
smiles from our mouths the wrest
"THE MOST CRUEL" is there contest
are u impressed ?
9 months is school i have to spend
9 months of misery
9 months of pain
9 months of slavery
how worse could this ever be !?
from this school i wanna run and flee
i wanna feel again that am free
oh mum to convince u that it sucks what is the fee ?
whatever it is i agree
HEY ! don't yell at me !!!
the **** in this school u dont see !
in this misery am chained and cuffed
help me ! gimme the key !
happy is just what we wanna be
Copyright ©
hetlerkh
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2009-09-10 04:23:41]
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Re: depression in school
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by wood on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 08:05:17 AM AEST
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| great write next time try to make the story a little more enveloping so the reader can actually feel the story |
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Re: depression in school
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 10:07:53 AM AEST
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I noticed on another write of yours that you said you "know how to write English". well, actually, I thought the word was "their" instead of there.
to make us sad is there quest
Take care,
Tim
P.S. Unless the person goes back to read your poem again, they will never see that you posted a comment on your own poem.
Thank you and have a pleasant day.. or try :-) |
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