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Dirty mirror
Contributed by
Puddleduck
on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 02:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I see that beautiful face
That wide smile
Your enchanting eyes
As deep as a river
Looking into the mirror
All of a sudden your smile dies
It turns upside down into a frown
You stare and stare
Looking your clone up and down
Then you start to moan
You think your unattractive,
And see nothing but fat
You think of all the negative things under the sun
And add that in to
Your reflection fills your mind with nothing but lies
Cant you see that
The mirrors dirty
And that your eyes arent seeing right
Your fine as you are
Theres no need to make your self into something perfect
Originality is better
So clean that mirror
And get some glasses
And then you will see
Your fine as you are
Change nothing
And make that smile come alive
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Puddleduck
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2009-09-10 14:44:17]
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Re: Dirty mirror
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by Puddleduck on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 02:44:56 PM AEST
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Re: Dirty mirror
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by InfinitePoet on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 03:19:13 PM AEST
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Nice Piece!! Keep writing & Keep Posting!!
Peace,
Dana |
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Re: Dirty mirror
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by ofi93 on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 02:37:46 AM AEST
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| nice, im sure lots can relate |
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