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Dreams
Contributed by
KeyboardPlayer
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Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 05:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Im a dreamer
Dream is what I do
Every night
Do you?
Close my eyes
From a terrible day
I enter a dream world
Where I shall stay
I dream about someone
Every night
I cant stop thinking
About her tonight
She in my dream
Like every night
I wake up
In the darkness
With the moon in sight
What is this?
What does this mean?
To see the same girl
In your dream?
The sun rises
In my sight
Then I realize
Its to bright
So I close my eyes
And think away
To the dream world
Where I shall stay
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KeyboardPlayer
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Re: Dreams
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by longhaircg on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 09:26:53 PM AEST
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| Dreams it was good, I liked it alot. |
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Re: Dreams
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 11:40:42 PM AEST
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Beautifull dreaming, beautifull write.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Dreams
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by dreamer5 on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 12:19:23 AM AEST
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| falling in love with a figment of your imagination kinda thing.. nice poem. |
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 12:21:46 AM AEST
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| Do you really want to know what I think or is that a rhetorical question? |
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 05:54:00 AM AEST
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| Oh yes, I know that feeling and that experience. The same girl. The same rejection...replayed, replayed, replayed. I'd prefer to see the moonlight... |
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Re: Dreams
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by CwisssStunnaaa on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 06:26:38 AM AEST
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| nice write keep up the good work |
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