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Where(Who)AmI?
Contributed by
justme03
on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 01:03:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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So...
many disguises,
many pieces to this puzzle,
many colors and fragmented images.
WHO...
Never...
know what to expect,
the same face twice,
to be free from my web of lies.
AM...
Lost...
in my own nightmare,
in my own dream,
in too many lives Im living.
I...
Who?
Why?
When...?
When will I find myself?
Looking...
in the mirror,
at this face,
to find myself.
WHERE...
am I?
Copyright ©
justme03
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2009-09-11 13:03:56]
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Re: Where(Who)AmI?
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by spud on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 03:16:40 PM AEST
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Hi there,
Lots of questions. Hope you're lucky and find all
the answers.
I like the form though, and I like your style.
Tommy
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Re: Where(Who)AmI?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 05:24:48 PM AEST
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This has a superb structure. It really flowed along brilliantly and was intelligently written.
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Re: Where(Who)AmI?
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by Lee on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 05:31:02 PM AEST
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This poem makes me think
of life's questions
we think have no answers.
The hardest questions I think we
face in the world are the ones
which have answers, but no
one wants to accept them.
Thank you for writing this,
as it has made me think.
Great write!
-Lee |
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