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gray matter
Contributed by
elle
on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 07:46:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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tumbling books in the half-light domino effect, they
& I scurrying to retrieve each dangling parti .........................................ciple
every free f a l l i n g verse
in. . . league with form & function
in. . . love with beauty & truth
each word theme posture purpose
. . . a friend of mind
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-09-11 19:46:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: gray matter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 07:52:06 PM AEST (User
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So you like reading, eh? Come here often? ;-)
I really like this, of course, as usual, right?
Unusual format ya' got there parti
.........................................ciple
but I am sure if I heard you read it, it would work perfectly.
Original, nice, enjoyable.
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Re: gray matter
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 11:08:20 PM AEST (User
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Book whores unite! LOL! Way to go Elle! I sleep with mine... |
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Re: gray matter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 10:13:00 PM AEST (User
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Superbly inventive! |
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