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If
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 11:29:34 PM in AEST
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If I owned the world, I would place at your feet,
If I owned the moon, Id make it sing you to sleep,
If I controlled the sun, I would have it shine everyday for you my love,
If I could drain the ocean, Id fill it with my passion,
If I owned Arizona, Id give you the Grand Canyon,
If I controlled the stars, they would light your way to my heart,
If you only knew, how much I love you,
If you only could see how you set my soul free,
If you only could feel what I know is real,
If I could travel to another Galaxy, Id want you to be with me,
If I could climb the top of Mt. Everest, It would be thoughts of you that warmed me,
If I were to die tomorrow, I would be a happy man because you loved me,
If these words could touch you, then you would know my heart is true,
If these lines could see you, theyd cry tears of crystal blue,
If you only knew. If you only knew.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: If
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 11:41:31 PM AEST
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Wow dear friend,
These beautiful words shall touch all who read them.
Great write that lets the whole planet see inside your heart.
Take care and stay safe.
Huggs, blessings, prayer, peace, joy,
emy |
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Re: If
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by LadyRose on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 03:41:33 AM AEST
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| I hope she knows cause I know just from reading these words....... |
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Re: If
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 03:54:13 AM AEST
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| Very nice. |
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Re: If
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by CwisssStunnaaa on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 05:32:37 AM AEST
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agreed with emy
this is such a beautiful write
keep up the beautiful nice work |
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Re: If
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by longhaircg on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 07:12:22 AM AEST
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I flew every place with you in this one. thank you so much, keep on writing.
Thank you |
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Re: If
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 07:53:56 AM AEST
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P, you always have an uncanny ability to make me want to jump
inside your words. You own so much passion and soul. This is a
beautiful expression of a completely altruistic love. And how so
very wonderful, that there exists in the world people who can
feel this, live this, breathe this. And once expressed and (hopefully)
shared, OH! how wonderful it is to live!!
Beautiful work, as always.
hope all is well ^_^
~ Breezy
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Re: If
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by bigperm on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 09:32:09 AM AEST
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| Masterfully crafted with brevity and a sincere tugging on the heart strings. You have inspired me to post a piece that I have written for my wife. Thanks for sharing this one. |
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Re: If
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 08:18:00 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written, Matt... Thanks for sharing this with us...
Be safe, always...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: If
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 06:59:20 PM AEST
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this is sooo beautiful !!!!!!!!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: If
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by muskiewoman on
Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 04:39:14 PM AEST
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It’s so encouraging to hear what one would do for love
If only everyone could feel love the way you do
What a better place the world would be
Thank you
Collette
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