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THE GIRL I LOVE.
Contributed by
TsunamiWaverider
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Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 11:48:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The girl i love i've never met
but she's not one i'll soon forget,
i've see her in my dreams at night
i've held her close and hugged her tight,
i've whispered softly in her ear
all the things she longs to hear,
and we've made love beneath moons light
...i hope she's there again tonight.
John Kent 25/8/09.
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TsunamiWaverider
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2009-09-12 23:48:21]
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Re: THE GIRL I LOVE.
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by CwisssStunnaaa on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 05:29:15 AM AEST
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love the write
keep up the good work |
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Re: THE GIRL I LOVE.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 07:16:16 AM AEST
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Oh my goodness!! *swoon*
How exquisite! You've spread an exciting and beautiful anticipation
with so few words. Very well done, poet! And that last line? oh how
wonderful! This is entirely sigh inducing and completely enchanting.
*sigh*
~ Breezy
(going to read again)
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Re: THE GIRL I LOVE.
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by ofi93 on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 10:05:48 PM AEST
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| its a really nice poem... |
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Re: THE GIRL I LOVE.
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by XchilvaX on
Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 05:52:22 PM AEST
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| I wont lie, your kinda rude still. You sound just like a song that you would here on the radio. Keep going man respect |
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Re: THE GIRL I LOVE.
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by Lionel on
Saturday, 14th February 2015 @ 08:57:09 PM AEST
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| This is great. Believe it or not - I had a dream of mine actually happen. |
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