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Speak
Contributed by
LadyRose
on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 04:11:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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With this pen I hold
I will praise the one
that gave me this passion.
I will use this talent,
to construct words into meaning
in order to reach out
to those who needs it.
I will spread this paper,
to those who can read
so that they can receive information
of what He did for me.
Proof of His awesome power
put done by my words....
I am His living vessel
.....speak
speak through me Lord.
Copyright ©
LadyRose
... [
2009-09-13 04:11:03]
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Re: Speak
(User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 03:16:45 PM AEST
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The last 2 lines really spoke. ;)
There was only one line that kinda ruined the poem for me and broke the flow.
"put done by my words" I'm not sure if that is what you meant to say... maybe the word done should be down?
I'm not sure though, so let me know! All in all a very beautiful poem. |
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