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The Note
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Dear me,
Ive written to give you
A very important message.
I want you to know
That this doesnt mean
I love you any less.
Im going away now.
Im going astray now.
Ill leave my cocoon,
Im leaving my nest,
Im leaving my morals with all of the rest of my past.
Dear me,
I got your letter,
I wanted to write you
To give you my support.
I know what youre doing,
I know that youre changing,
I know that you love me,
And I love you back,
And you know whats right.
You know what you need.
So get on that bus and validate me.
I know what youre after, I know you can get it.
If you give yourself just a little more credit,
Then you can be happy,
Whatever you do.
If you can be happy,
You know I will too.
Dear me,
Thank you for all youve done in all my life.
Im glad you appreciate,
And if I can compensate,
For all of the pain Ive caused,
And all your strife.
Just write me a letter,
Ill make it all better,
Just point to the wound,
And Ill remove that caustic knife.
Im sorry, and I hope you dont feel betrayed.
Welcome to the end of the lemon parade.
Do you remember the day, we sat on your swing,
and talked about nothin, and did everything?
Im starting to cry now, so Id better go.
Ive still got to pack, but I want you to know
That Ill always be here, and Ill always care,
And you know our past will always be there.
So have a nice day, a good rest of your life.
Im sorry I stabbed you with that caustic knife,
But theres no forgiveness, no time for good-byes,
Ive been far too patient with my own obscene lies.
I wish I could kiss you, just one last time.
But Ive got to go now, I know Ill be fine.
Dear me,
Theres something that I forgot to tell you.
But now youre gone, so just what should I do?
I just wanted you to know,
You didnt have to go,
I waited on the street corner,
so I could see you off,
and I havent seen you,
its been three days.
Ill treasure your life with me for always.
Its starting to snow now, I really should go now,
But you havent left yet, you never drove by.
Its awfully cold now, am I gonna die?
When we were together, I had such a blast,
Now I dont exist. Im just part of your past.
Goodbye.
Copyright ©
Butterat_Zool
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2003-03-31 13:45:00]
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Re: The Note
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 05:47:13 AM AEST
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WOW! This is a really good poem. Some parts made me laugh - others made me sad and what a unique topic to write about. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: The Note
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by Crys on
Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 01:58:27 AM AEST
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I loved this, really... It made me think of how so many people want me to change, but it's just too hard to say good bye to my old self. But I shouldn't have to change because someone says so any how... Beautiful.... Now back to your poetry to be amazed once again..
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