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crow-topped tree
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:18:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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five landed
five at five
in the evening
breeze
loops of air
currents
and Autumn haze
threading
right through
reverbrating
with a taste
of Earth's
own blood
and
chit-chattering
Durante-nosed
squirrels
I talk much
to these rodents
negotiating pay/play
with peanuts
they listen
as Fall becomes
visions of brillant
crow-topped trees
spilling leaves.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-09-16 20:18:31]
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Re: crow-topped tree
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:51:57 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: crow-topped tree
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:19:23 PM AEST
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| Interesting! |
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Re: crow-topped tree
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by elle on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 03:06:13 PM AEST
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| Nice take on the coming season. Always a treat of words, coming from you. elle :) |
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