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Lost in the Waves
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:30:34 PM in AEST
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Moonlight reflects on the uplifting waves;
mesmerized by the crashing surf as it washes wishes astray,
I settle in the damp sand and leave impressions in nature's mold.
The ocean whispers a thousand secrets each wave has been told;
Peace perfectly precise at the peak of the highest tide,
climaxing at the exact height where all dreams reside.
Waves wash away the world's woes;
rolling into another until calm takes control,
I sift the sand of this magical land with eyes wide open.
Lost in the waves, my eyes show the ocean devotion.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-09-16 20:30:34]
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Re: Lost in the Waves
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:30:17 PM AEST
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It made me want to drive down to the beach and sit on the sand and just watch the waves.....well done!
John. |
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Re: Lost in the Waves
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:38:08 PM AEST
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| It's amazing how many slightly differenttwists there can be on a similar subject. This is very good. *** Comment edited - Self promotion is not allowed at YPDC. Thank you. Moderator_18 September 18, 2009 *** |
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Re: Lost in the Waves
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 12:51:21 AM AEST
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| Your imagery is great in this one! It was as if I was there in your fantasy. Excellent. |
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Re: Lost in the Waves
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 06:47:59 AM AEST
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You've captured perfectly the inspiration of a night on the beach. Right down to the moonlight reflecting off the waves.
If this is just a fantasy and not a memory you've shared with us, you have quite an imagination. |
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