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The Polar Bear
Contributed by
recyclebin
on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:10:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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My dark coal eyes,
Stars gleaming,
Make a star materialize.
The aura borealis
In the far distance.
Gives the horizon
An ember of subsistence.
The feeling of ice
The feeling so nice.
The feeling of ice
So nice.
I’m falling
The frigid arctic air,
Feels so cool.
This barren wasteland
Is our paradise jewel.
I’m a carnivore
I’m the polar bear.
Here I am
Feeling the ice
The feeling so nice
The feeling of ice
So nice.
We have roamed
Forever and a day
Now my homeland
Is melting away.
The ice that was so nice
Is breaking piece by piece
My joy, the heart
Breaking, piece by piece.
These dark coal eyes
Bare frozen tears.
Our numbers dwindle
In this new global frontier.
I’m at war,
In this human home.
A carnivore
I’m the polar bear………..
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Re: The Polar Bear
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:18:24 PM AEST
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Very touching write, my friend.
Sad but a masterpeice.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Polar Bear
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:38:08 PM AEST
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I'm not much in to non-rhyming poetry as i believe it is far too easy to put down random thoughts and disguise it as 'poetry'.....but i know what i like - and THAT i liked.
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Re: The Polar Bear
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 12:56:39 AM AEST
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I thought you were Bin, but okay. ;-)
Anyway, I like that you could write from the bear's perspective and even though he (the bear) is in a serious plight, he was still well enough to grace us with his poem. Nice imagery.
Try staying a while next time, dude.
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