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She's my Rose
Contributed by
jrlatin77
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Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 04:53:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She's my lady, She's my Rose
She's been waiting for a while
As she claims me with her eyes
She walks towards me, with a smile
Oh, a glow I see surrounds her
As she smiles, She glides more near
there's a warmth that fills our bodies
like the sun, dropped down a tear
As she reaches out to hold me
I draw her towards my chest
We gaze into each others eyes
And finally find our rest
I lean into her eager lips
And watch her eyes shut close
And softly place a lovers kiss
On to the pedals,
Of my Rose.
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2009-09-18 04:53:49]
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Re: She's my Rose
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 06:48:11 AM AEST
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| To me this is very similar in content to Crystal Slipper. I much prefer this one and really like the line "like the sun, dropped down a tear"...good work. |
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