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That You Would Be . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 01:41:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If
love were a tree
then that you would be
consuming each ray of the
sun,
your leaves would be like
every kiss that we shared
since falling in love from day
one.
If
love was the rain
that nourished a flower
then that you would be
my
love.
were i but a moment
i'd live for an hour
thinking of you there
of.
If
love was the sea
when it kisses the shore
then that you would be
forever more,
unto your horizon
i'd love you so
while into your depths
my love would
flow.
If
love was a star
that glowed in the night
then that
you would certainly
be,
you'd make the moon
fall in love with moonlight
for the rest
of
eternity.
Ben
myheartsvoicebjpsno1special
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Re: That You Would Be . . . Ben
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 05:54:27 PM AEST
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Hi Ben,
such a beautifully emotive write. Always you can weave the
most amazing emotions together with the most delicate words.
I ADORE the metaphor in the first verse. Absolutely gorgeous,
my friend.
Always a pleasure to visit your page ~
~ Breezy
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Re: That You Would Be . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 07:35:44 PM AEST
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so sweet, so sensitive to your love, your just such a dear writer, may love go on for you both for eternity...........
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: That You Would Be . . . Ben
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 10th February 2015 @ 02:02:16 AM AEST
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Your poetry, the love, the soul you breathe into it
Always a joy for my soul
Love is the greatest thing to have
And yours is so pure so strong
For you and this special lady
Thank you
Kara |
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