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Hanging.........................................................................
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 08:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hanging
on the edge of life's cliff,
Holding
on for dear life,
Hovering
over fate's pit,
Hallucinating
about Heaven's voice,
Hypnotizing
while viewing life and death,
Handling
the battle inside my head.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-09-18 20:37:05]
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Re: Hanging.........................................................................
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 11:28:00 PM AEST
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I love this. I like the "H" words for each start to a new stanza line and the intense drama.
Thank you.
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