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ODE TO A WELSHMAN
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anthonygoodwinjnr
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Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 10:03:31 PM in AEST
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Dont drop your bottle Courtney
Dont let your faade fade
Do your best to remain upright
In denial to the grave
Once there was a man who had it all
A wife two kids and a house to call his castle
A well paid job of responsibility
He had the means and capability
He was well liked and he was clever
Hed socialise, chat with whoever
But with pressure new, weakness grew
He hid from what he had to do
Dont drop your bottle Courtney
Dont let your faade fade
Do your best to remain upright
In denial to the grave
Maybe the cases became immense
Spending weeks trying to make sense
Of other peoples relentless heartbreak
You try to give but they just take
The lost and forgotten souls that live in shabby holes
An underground network led by moles
Its up to you oh great redeemer
Look you, now; close is that your sister?
Dont drop your bottle Courtney
Dont let your faade fade
Do your best to remain upright
In denial to the grave
So the children left, set off for Uni
The wife had enough of a drunken loony
You lost the will and the license to drive
Sometimes we all wondered how you stayed alive
A gentle man, kind man, jovial and fun
You turned your back on friendship for a lifetime on the run
Now down the tunnel there comes a light
Head towards it with an open heart for a chance to put things right
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Re: ODE TO A WELSHMAN
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by shelby on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 10:08:06 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful and well written poem.
I felt every moment here.
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Re: ODE TO A WELSHMAN
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 10:26:43 PM AEST
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Truly touching..and so often true in many cases....
Enjoyed reading this..
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Re: ODE TO A WELSHMAN
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by spud on
Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 01:59:31 PM AEST
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Hi there,
Well written and a good (albeit sad) story.
He sounds like a man who needs to reinvent himself. Hope he gets there.
Tommy
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