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My promise
Contributed by
hungarianhaze
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Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 02:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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We Can always be around
A chance beyond the haze
You could say my heart was earth bound
My smile smothered in shame
my baggy eyes , withered away
God's message so misunderstood almost shady in presence
But we cant possibly understand , we are the ant feeding off our dirt
boggled in Christian faith i would set the serpent ablaze
look to the sky , guide me through the maze
Lean your head on my shoulder , for I will be a whisper
A vast promise to swallow oblivion
A mortal among men ,meant to see you laugh
I cant possibly see , loves in front of me
its shining so bright , i still cant see
Your health and resilience is my cause
I am a promise
a mere promise
To swallow your oblivion
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2009-09-21 14:01:18]
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Re: My promise
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 05:21:55 PM AEST
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I think this is sinister!
I can imagine a death metal band doing it justice.........I quite like death metal and I quite like this. |
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