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Take may there again
Contributed by
AngelFox
on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 07:51:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Take me to that place again
When songs mean something again.
Want to feel right again
Multiple souls do whirls in my mind
Confusing from... sleepless night to day
All they do is linger and take up space.
Thoughts like centipedes
That step on sand and leave many prints
Confused...
I have not been myself since.
Can't think right
Can't walk right
Can't dance right
My soul has no rhythm
Just empty thoughts that constantly tumble
Like a toddler reaching for his makers' finger.
Take me to that play where everyone stays awake.
Melancholy memories manipulate melodies which were once sweet...
Like cake.
Can't write
Won't write
Poetry has no rhythm
Just wax thoughts that whirl
but still linger
Copyright ©
AngelFox
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2009-09-21 19:51:59]
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Re: Take may there again
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 08:28:06 PM AEST
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Very sad and blue but realy good writing.
Hope you feel better now.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Take may there again
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 07:19:40 AM AEST
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| For a first post this is an interesting piece. I like your style and can feel the mood. It is reminiscent of one of mine called WORLD WEARY ME, which I will post later. I enjoyed reading this, keep it up. |
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Re: Take may there again
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by LadyRose on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 08:02:10 AM AEST
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| Funny how feeling blue squeezes all these beautiful expressive words out of us......love the poem and your style of putting these words together........dont stop writing....... |
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Re: Take may there again
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by amarillys on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 08:21:31 AM AEST
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Beautiful written. Your poem is very descriptive. Your emotions stream from your pen magically.
Please keep writing. |
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