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Rooftops Rooftops
Contributed by
Sparkz16
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Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 04:28:23 PM in AEST
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Rooftops Rooftops.
Looking up tall.
Looking down what a fall.
Wanting to be like a bird,
Jump off and glide.
Hmmm would i be gliding or flying.
Maybe hiding really.
Its only a matter of minutes before i hit the asphalt.
Silly me no wings to fly.
Just scrambled thoughts to jump, my fall.
Looking up these rooftops are tall, but looking down its a spiral fall.
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Re: Rooftops Rooftops
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 09:55:57 AM AEST
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Well put together. It rhymed in all the right places and the imagery was good.
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Re: Rooftops Rooftops
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by trackiller2006 on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 07:36:49 PM AEST
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I loved it and I'm glad that you are still writing because you have a great talent for expressing your thoughts into words. Keep up the great artistry!
Your friend,
The Poet of Evil
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