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Damage Incorporated
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 06:42:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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DAMAGE INCORPORATED
by: Dana 2008
orig work
orig writer
I like to journey to the
beauty of
True Love,
the way I see it in my
mind
It takes so long
for me to see
it real clear....
And when I grasp it
and
Cherish it
it's all I want to
be near....
For so long
there was
NOTHING
beautiful at all
that I could
remember not
even any of my dreams...
They were filled with
Screams
and Rage and
Angry, ugly,
Bloody Streams
running down my
face,
blindly, stumbling,
being chased.....
Slowly my
Existence
being Erased,
NEVER
wrapped in
Love's Embrace...
Copyright ©
InfinitePoet
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2009-09-22 18:42:29]
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Re: Damage Incorporated
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 07:12:18 PM AEST
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Catchy title.
Good write even in the sadness.
I've written on just about every thing.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: Damage Incorporated
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by ammar on
Saturday, 10th September 2011 @ 01:13:57 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this one. What struck me most was the rendering of the tears as being angry streams running down the face. That's indeed a captivating expression!
Peace
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